WALT: deconstruct, and re-craft our paragraphs so they are more interesting for our readers.
This week we have been Deconstructing and Re - crafting our paragraphs in the story's . We had to try and add details in our writing to make it interesting for our readers. We also had to try and use different features to draw a picture in our readers minds. We had to replace all of the boring sentences and put in some really interesting one's so the reader would understand what where trying to do to make them imagine that it is happening.
This is a great description of what you are learning about in class Roimata. Ka pai. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your awesome writing.
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