tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373879568434323568.post3165541157489567908..comments2022-10-27T22:54:46.729+13:00Comments on Roimata: Cross Country - Effective Writing (Show not tell)PES Blogs Admin 2014http://www.blogger.com/profile/15710822352595092146noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373879568434323568.post-78275831658968038352016-09-02T10:33:21.250+12:002016-09-02T10:33:21.250+12:00Thank you Mr Wiseman :)Thank you Mr Wiseman :)Roimatahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02292411318056499417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8373879568434323568.post-36728881054238300362016-08-30T08:03:06.753+12:002016-08-30T08:03:06.753+12:00Hi Roimata, this is some great descriptive writing...Hi Roimata, this is some great descriptive writing. I like how you have shown not told your reader about the cross country. Well done!Mr Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14831955844410099547noreply@blogger.com